In the myths there are many themes, but I think Gods, Creation of Man, and Water are the most common stories. And maked connectioin with other myths.
The themes of the Gods, creation of man and the cosmic egg. Which is unusual because their ways of life and beliefs are so different.
In the Babylonian and the Egyptian myth, there Gods who have similar powers. The babylonian god created the world with his own power after winning the war. The Egyptian god also had a power to create the world. They both had similar powers but for Egypt the god's daughter and son made the world.
In the myths there are many stories about creation of man. In the Chinese myth, Phan Ku's fleas became men and in the Egyptian myth, Atum's tears became men. As we can see, many elements in myths startd from creation of man.
There are many myths in the world, but in the Yoruba myth, the water was dangerous becuase the the god in Yoruba myth madde a flood and killed all the people, after that happanened, people were scared of water.
In the world there are lots of myths but some of the myth has similar stories and other myths makes connection with other myths. Also there are many stories about Gods, Creation of Man, Ware and etc.
Pleasing writing. Some suggestions for improvement would be to look again and think about your use of capital letters. Do not end on etc - this is a weak conclusion. Your thesis statement is strong (but you don't have to repeat it twice). The water section needs another myth to compare with the Yoruba myth. I like your voice and sequencing in this piece.
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